Texts A, B, C and E all
share either a primary or secondary purpose to persuade. Strong inclusions, A
and B, are advertisements belonging to an organisation promoting specific
issues; A which is smoking and B badger culling. Text E is also a strong
inclusion: a blurb to a fiction book, its purpose being to persuade the
audience to buy said book. All the texts use features which directly address
the audience. The use of the second person pronoun in text E, “Enter-if you can
bear it-the…” adds a personal touch to the blurb of the book inviting you in,
which contrasts with the previous description of the book which is simply to
inform . The use of a mitigated imperative here, which is softened with the embedded
clause: “…if you can bear it...” makes it almost a challenge for the reader to
‘enter’ the book. This persuades well because instead of the reader feeling
forced to read the book, they may feel it is their ‘choice’ and that they
haven’t been persuaded at all, which possibly increases the likelihood of
people buying this book. The second person pronoun in text A, “Every time you
smoke your blood gets...” works effectively with the use of graphology to
create a bigger impact, of perhaps horror or shock, as it is implying that
‘your’ blood will get ‘thick and dirty’ just like the disturbing image they
have used. This suggests that their primary audience is people who already
smoke as well as the secondary audience of putting people off who have not yet
tried smoking. Text B uses the imperative: “Don’t shoot!” as the main feature
of the advertisement, this possibly is used to play with the readers emotions,
implying the badger is asking you not to shoot making you feel responsible and
guilty especially as it is an exclamatory sentence, which could lead you to
make links with similar situations, for example, innocent civilians in war
situations. The entire leaflet works effectively with this first bold message.
The lexical field of war has been used, for example, words such as “kill
zones”, “survive” and “shoot”, end up making the badgers on the right/innocent
side in this ‘war against badgers’. The bold orthography in this sentence
attracts the eye to the word “shoot”. This could give the reader a sense of
power, implying that they have this ‘metaphorical gun’ where they have the
choice to do right or wrong. The audience for this leaflet is everyday people;
it would be posted through doors where the household has no subscription, for
example, to the RSPCA, meaning the bold orthography also works as a means of
making sure that they pick up this leaflet as opposed to throwing it away. Weak
inclusion C has a secondary purpose to persuade. It is packaging for ‘lush’
where it is promoting recycling. Its primary purpose being to inform, giving
facts about the dangers of littering, for example, “Plastic waste kills up to
1000,000 sea mammals and countless fish every year…”. However, the fact that
the packaging is based entirely around spreading an environmentally friendly
message, including graphology such as well-known logos like the recycling
symbol, is a means of persuading the audience to buy the product. Lush is well
known for being environmentally friendly and many people would shop there being
well aware of this fact. This means that the information about plastic waste
would actually persuade the audience to buy the product.
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