Monday, 23 February 2015

Grouping Task:



Texts A, E, F and D all share either a primary or secondary purpose to instruct. Texts A and E are the back of a product, instructing how to use them, A being watermelon seeds and E being the back of a moisturiser for children. Strong inclusions A, E and D all use imperatives to give clear and concise information in a manner which is quick to read. For example, text A uses imperatives throughout like, ““Sow in thoroughly warmed soil”, “Cover with 1” of fine soil,” and “Keep evenly moist.” The use of imperative here instructs without confusing the reader with long winded explanations, and also as a means of saving space as the text has to fit on the back of the seed packet. Text D is the information on an ID photo card for the train. The use of imperative in this text coincides with the formal register of the information, for example, “produce it for inspection,” and “Show this Photocard when you buy a Season Ticket or Travelcard.” Which suggests a sense of importance and informs the reader of problems which may arise if you do not use the card correctly, for example, “It must not be used by any other person.” The information here has been crafted in a way which instructs with no confusion. Weak inclusion F is a charity leaflet its primary purpose being to persuade and its secondary purpose being to inform. The instructions in the poster are mitigated as they are telling the reader how to give to their charity and want to avoid making the audience feel forced to “donate”. For example, “Donate your clothes,” and “pop them into the cardboard collection bin...” These imperatives are softened by the word choices. The word donate could give the reader a sense of power, if they donated their unwanted clothing it is their choice, and they are contributing to a good cause. Whereas a synonym of donate, such as give, could make the reader feel as though they are being told what to do, which could make them less inclined to give generously which is one of the many purposes of the leaflet . And the word choice of “pop” is very friendly and creates personality as opposed to a synonym such as “put”, which could seem too ‘forceful’ for example. Text E shares this ‘gentle’ way of instructing, “Use as often as required…” this imperative does not come across as commanding, again it gives the reader the power in the situation, as they decide how often they use the cream. This coincides with the lexical field of serenity, words such as “gently,” “softens,” “nourishes,” “soft,” “sensitive,” “supple,” all are used to create a calm feel. So the imperatives must match the way in which the producer wanted to sell their product, a cream for children with “sensitive skin”. The intended audience here would be parents and so the word choices are important as they must work with the secondary purpose which is to persuade people to buy the product.

Texts B and C are both transcripts of either partly rehearsed or spontaneous speech, text B is an interview between a news presenter and president Obama, and text C is a conversation between friends. Different speech features are used in order to suit the context in which the conversations are taking place. Text B has a much more formal register than that of C and the transcript could be mistaken for writing due to the lack of non-fluency features like fillers and false starts. The formality of the two transcripts could be displayed by how the individuals address one another. Text C uses the second person pronoun “you” when referring to one another whereas Obama and the interviewer use each other’s names. This could also suggest power; usually the conventions of an interview mean that the interviewer, the one asking the questions, is the “dominant speaker”. However in this case, due to Obamas status, he is the one who leads the interview. The greeting at the beginning: “Mr.President, thank you for doing this,” differences from usual interviews where the interviewee may thank the interviewer for their time for example. This may be because of Obamas status, the news channel he appeared on here is sophisticated and the content of the interview is complex and important. Obama will be used to speaking under these circumstances and therefore has many skills when speaking to a vast audience. Whereas text C’s audience is only the two participants in the conversation who are most likely friends. This is suggested by the anaphoric referencing to earlier conversations suggesting that the two participants talk often. As well as Sally asking John, “so how's your new job going?” which, at a first glance, could be phatic talk however she then asks more meaningful questions about his job “so you've got to deal with all the moaning and complaining…” suggesting Sally cares about Johns feelings.

Texts A and B both contain specialised lexis. Text A is the back of a packet of seeds and contains words such as “fusarium wilt”, “anthracnose”, “sow” and “seedlings”. These words are specialised to the lexical field of gardening meaning the intended audience would be ‘keen gardeners’ who are familiar with these plant diseases, it also suggests that the intended audience is people who perhaps grow water melons annually as water melons would not be the easiest plant to grow and so the manufacturer is able to use complex gardening jargon on the back of their product as its highly likely that only people with a pragmatic understanding of the product would buy the seeds. At first glance text B, a transcript for an interview with president Obama, seems to appeal to a wide audience, however the use of political jargon such as, “the Senate”, “the Speaker” or “Republican” suggests that the intended audience is people who have knowledge of the subject. This could suggest that this particular audience is very narrow. Even though text B is for the news, the communication is very specific, speaking only about recent political events and avoiding any type of phatic talk, using specialised lexis such as “the bill” which would only be understood with a pragmatic understanding of the context in which this specialised lexis is being used.



1 comment:

  1. A knowledgeable and convincing essay. The first group should probably be 'use imperatives' given what you have written and none of them are weak inclusions, so check what that means and make sure you are not confusing it with sub-groups. Good call on the 'lexical field of serenity' - it can be quite hard to find a hypernym and you did that really well.

    The second group isn't really a group - you can't group on 'transcripts as the form of one is an interview and the form of the other is a casual conversation and you only really talk about differences - what could you group them on?

    The level of terminology in group three is excellent - can you deepen it by showing how the jargon helps them to communicate for the GAP?

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